Georgiana what is here is looking good, you are posting fairly regularly with notes on specific lessons and progress, you could still do more of this!
There are also various bits of work that are not here or are incomplete. You have undertaken 1 case study and there is some useful detail here, at times it is descriptive but you link to genre mostly. Be more consistent with terminology (cover lines not sub headings) and you need to link closer to target audience. You also need to look at a media kit for Kerrang and to carry out a second case study - NME or Q would be useful to your ideas. You haven't evaluated your college magazine feedback or set goals and haven't completed the newsstand and distribution task. These issues are reflected in your presentation, which doesn't mention case studies or inspiration, journalism and could have more detail in terms of layout (again look at case studies!). The photography shoot looks good - careful not to stretch images - location photography and more detailed planning ready to make your magazine now..
Georgiana what is here is looking good, you are posting fairly regularly with notes on specific lessons and progress, you could still do more of this!
ReplyDeleteThere are also various bits of work that are not here or are incomplete. You have undertaken 1 case study and there is some useful detail here, at times it is descriptive but you link to genre mostly. Be more consistent with terminology (cover lines not sub headings) and you need to link closer to target audience. You also need to look at a media kit for Kerrang and to carry out a second case study - NME or Q would be useful to your ideas. You haven't evaluated your college magazine feedback or set goals and haven't completed the newsstand and distribution task. These issues are reflected in your presentation, which doesn't mention case studies or inspiration, journalism and could have more detail in terms of layout (again look at case studies!). The photography shoot looks good - careful not to stretch images - location photography and more detailed planning ready to make your magazine now..
Amy